Here's my H/Allelujah fic for the doujinshi project. May be slightly revised tonight, but I want to get some response about it now. I've never been concerned about my work being entirely coherent before. XD
There are three short sentences/phrases in parentheses that I may or may not keep. I don't think they're entirely necessary, but I can keep them in if the fic doesn't seem to get the point across without them. Basically, I want it to be fairly clear what he does at the end, but leave it just ambiguous enough for it to require some thought. IT IS PROBABLY SOME EPIC!FAIL ON MY PART.
So if you read it, just please do me a favor and let me know what you think happened at the end, or if it's lame, or whatever.
Allelujah and Hallelujah. No pair. PG. About 400 words.
( Possible Title = Live Through )